Show, not tell

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 WE TELL: Masha was upset.
 WE SHOW: Masha silently looked at me and tears flowed down my cheeks.

 Another example:
 WE TELL: Stepan is tired and tired of hateful work.
 WE SHOW: Stepan staggered out of the office into the fresh air.  He ran a hand over his face, as if washing away everything that had accumulated during the day with a headwind.  With his other hand he held onto the wall.  It might have seemed to a passerby that he was drunk.  But no.  The look was clear and full of rage.

 Agree, it’s more interesting when we “show”.

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